Can’t construct a complaint? Here is a sample in making a complaint letter

Can’t construct a complaint? Here is a sample in making a complaint letter

When writing a complaint letter, it’s difficult to know where to begin. This challenge expresses itself in free-form rants and frustration about what to say, if our inbox is any indication. It doesn’t have to be that way: merely stating the facts and demonstrating why the organization should assist you is sufficient. If you are not much of a wordsmith, Consumerist is here to assist and help you.

Here’s a sample letter based on a successful complaint to a vehicle manufacturer that recently came across our desk. The particulars have been obscured, but the letter’s overall format has not changed.

The summary. Let someone else read your e-mail and summarize your dilemma for you if you can’t do it in two or three sentences. As a tipline reader for Consumerist, I can’t stress enough how critical it is to get your point across before the letter-eyes reader’s glaze over.

In the first paragraph, put your problem and suggested resolution. Then get on with the details.

742 Evergreen Terrace

Springfield, USA 23456

July 19, 2014

Hoverbike Corporation of America

Attn: Customer Service

P.O. Box 1578

Kabletown, WV 25414

Dear Hoverbike Corporation:

I am writing to your company about a problem with my Hoverbike, a 2012 Skylark model. I began to have trouble staying aloft a few months ago, and this week the height control module completely failed. While the bicycle is a few months out of warranty, I believe that this occurred because of a design flaw in the Skylark, and I am asking that your company cover or share with me the cost of the required repair.

Next are the details: who, what, where, when?  If it applies to your case, provide addresses, store numbers, and serial numbers. If necessary, you can add more information about your incident or issue here, as well as expand on what you described in the first few sentences on the opening part of your letter.

My parents purchased my Hoverbike (serial number 118532C423) for me on April 21, 2012 from our local authorized Hoverbike dealer, Krebs Cycles of Springfield. I have enjoyed riding my bicycle, but also taken good care of it, performing all recommended maintenance, keeping it meticulously clean, not hovering over bodies of water, and not riding recklessly.

After researching this specific problem and talking to other Hoverbike owners, I have learned that this is a common issue with Hoverbikes manufactured before 2013. I believe that the failure of this module was not due to neglect or error on my part. I am asking that the Hoverbike Corporation cover in full or share with me the cost of this repair.

I have enclosed a work order from my mechanic that details the repairs needed on my bicycle.

This next section is optional, but often helpful: discuss how your problem goes against the product’s branding and marketing, and also your relationship with the brand.

Of course, don’t feel the need to explain your relationship to the brand if you don’t really have a history of using their products or friends or family who do. Yet consider the product’s branding and marketing and how it relates to your situation: does the company tout its notebook computers’ portability while your own battery won’t charge, tethering you to your desk? Has a travel website that advertises itself as convenient and integrated caused serious problems with your travel plans? Mention any such contrasts if they apply.

Hoverbike’s reputation and marketing emphasize your bicycles’ durability, reliability, and safety. Before this mechanical failure, I was very pleased with my Hoverbike, and in a few years I will need to upgrade to a larger one as I grow, but now I hesitate to choose one. My brother and sister also own Hoverbikes that are functioning perfectly, and they aren’t so sure that that they will stick with the brand after watching my experiences with the mechanical failure of my Hoverbike.

If your marketing campaigns are any indication, I am your target customer, a young girl who is allowed to explore her town on her own and use her bicycle for travel and recreational rides. More importantly, I am eight years old and look forward to a future of eco-conscious commuting. I hope to have many decades of cycling ahead of me, and I want to continue riding Hoverbikes in the future. Please restore my faith in your brand, stand behind your product, and cover the cost of this repair.

Thank you for taking the time to read this letter.

Sincerely,

Lisa Simpson

610-555-3223

[email protected]

 

That’s it! Giving the company a fair deadline to reply to you and outlining some other acceptable resolutions will also help in certain situations. Even if all you want is an apology, telling the company what you want is an important starting point.

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